Facade Poem
I seem to be like a whole note that is mellow and long
But really I am a sixteenth note that is lively and quick
I seem to be like the moon that is timid and tranquil
But really I am the sun that is bright and shining
But really I am the sun that is bright and shining
I seem to be like a corner store that is ever so lonely
But really I am a circus that is exciting and fun
I seem to be like a businessman that is so serious
But really I am a clown that is funny and jubilant.
I seem to be like the inside that is keeping things to myself
But really I am the outside that is sharing what I have
I seem to be like a cat that is feisty and mean
But really I am a dog that is loyal and kindhearted
I seem to be like a ruby that is bold and outgoing
But really I am an emerald that is quiet and fearful
I seem to be like neon that is vivid
But really I am helium that is light
I seem to be like grass that is prosperous
But really I am a mountain that is unique
I am myself!
By: Andrew C.
I like this poem a lot! I love how some of the elements aren't so similar, like helium and neon.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, I liked yours too. :D
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ReplyDeleteI really love the first line about the whole note and the sixteenth note! Are you a musician if so what instrument??
ReplyDeleteYeah, I play the violin and piano.
DeleteI love this poem. The flow is very smooth
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem! I also enjoyed your whole blog!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the wonderful compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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